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You criticised the way I write

with words

    spread out

                                                          like this

and I

     I wondered if you were, for once,

 saying something right.




But I deserve

            to take up
                                                                        space

my words deserve

                          to fill a page


I hope they cover
                           
     continents

one day.
16/12/2013
Thanks for reading!
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imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Writer
This is beautiful! I love it! :heart:
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bonfirelights Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you! :hug:
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Karinta Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student General Artist
I agree with drifter-dallyings - that last sentence was LOVELY.
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Tales-of-Tao Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Wow. The last line. Oh my. Just...wow. :heart:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014   General Artist
brilliant :heart:
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love how much this says in so few words. Well done!
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CurtainRodFace Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This. I absolutely adore this. So much strength.
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xtcgm Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
Nicely put.
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Graphix-Goddess Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Professional Writer
Wow. That's beautiful! You're right, too! I wish all writers the luck and joys of being able to spread their words across the world !
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