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You criticised the way I write

with words

    spread out

                                                          like this

and I

     I wondered if you were, for once,

 saying something right.




But I deserve

            to take up
                                                                        space

my words deserve

                          to fill a page


I hope they cover
                           
     continents

one day.
16/12/2013
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imperfect-parachute's avatar
This is beautiful! I love it! :heart: